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Of Mothers and Children - Girl Fight


Tittle: Of Mothers and Children - Girl Fight
Author: storm_8
Fandom: CSI
Pairings: Sara/Sofia
Raiting: PG
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Ha! Obviously I don't own any of these characters except the original one's...
A/N: Not betaed, so all mistakes are mine.

A little piece on Alex and Jen... Things seem to be progressing...

Enjoy and comment, because it let's me know I should continue!!!!





Jennifer Mitchell thought her day couldn’t get any worse than it already was. Of course whenever someone thinks or says that, Fate usually intervenes and proves them wrong.

The first class of the morning had been maths and her teacher wasn’t very happy about the latest score in one of the tests she had had. The man made her promise to find a tutor and set her extra homework, so she would start working more and improve her grades. Jen had scowled at him for the rest of the class. Her grades were fine, great actually. Only maths tended to cause problems.

Then there was science class. Her lab partner talked about the latest gossip: who was dating whom (“Seriously, Anna is way too good for that geek.”), who broke up with whom (“Serves Natasha right, cheating on her boyfriend with his best friend…”), her latest crush on a guy from the lacrosse team (“Isn’t he just hunky?”), on and on.

What really made her already volatile temper snap, was the girl saying that Angelica, from her Literature class, finally got her wits together to ask Alex, basketball team captain, out. The deed was supposed to happen the next break.

Jen’s eye twitched, her nostrils flared and she turned a menacing glare on her lab partner. “Angelica is what?”

Gulping at the sudden change from completely uninterested to scary, the girl laughed nervously. She sagged with relief when the bell rang and Jennifer stomped out of the room.

Passing Jack and Ashley in the corridor, she didn’t even acknowledge them. They watched her walk towards an unsuspecting Angelica and scrambled after their friend.

“Angelica!” the girl in question turned at someone calling her name “Is it true?”

Fully aware of what Jen was asking, she flipped her hair behind her shoulders and crossed her arms. “Is what true?” she asked, smirking innocently.

Slamming the girl against the lockers, Jennifer ground out “Don’t… You… Dare!”

Not fazed in the least Angelica threw back “Why? Are you afraid Alex will actually say yes, when I ask her out?”

Now one knew, who hit whom first, but the fight that ensued would have put some wrestlers to shame.

While everyone cheered, Ashley and Jack tried to break up the fight. “Jen! Stop it!” Ash yelled and tried grabbing one of her friends’ arms, while Jack grabbed the other girl around the waist and tried pulling her away.

Alerted by the ruckus, principal James came walking down the hall and with the help of another teacher separated the still squabbling girls.

So, now Jennifer sat in the infirmary with a bloody lip and glaring at the other student, as the principal preached about lack of respect and that two girls should know better than to behave like crazy housewives. Thinking it couldn’t get any worse, she jumped in her seat when Alex slammed the door open.

“Miss Curtis, can I help you?” the principal asked.

“I heard about what happened and came to check on Jen…” the brunette trailed off when she noticed her friend’s state: rumpled clothing, hair askew and bloody lip. “Holy Shit!”

“Miss Curtis, watch your language! And wait outside until I’m finished!”
******

When she was allowed back in, the school nurse tended to the scratches on Angelica. Completely ignoring them, Alex stood in front of Jen, eyebrow raised. The girl looked at her friend and then dropped her eyes in shame.

From the door, Jack, Dave, Erik and Ashley watched apprehensively, but ready to intervene if necessary.

She would later question herself about her actions, but seeing Jen like that pulled at Alex. She took a step closer and wrapped her arms around the girl’s shoulders and pulled her towards her body. Jennifer blushed furiously, but relented, resting her forehead against the brunette’s chest and closing her eyes.

Angelica fumed and glared at the nurse when she whispered something about young love. The four friends at the door smiled in relief. “Now we’re getting somewhere…”

Comments

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[info]rivasilvercrown wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 07:32 pm (UTC)
Yes... now they are getting somewhere. But how will Angelica retaliate??? :D (2 stories today... yippi!!!!)
[info]storm_8 wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 08:13 pm (UTC)
That's a very good question... I haven't got to how Angelica will react; I'll have to think about it

I may post one more today it it's ready, but after today I might not post for a while, since I'm flying off tomorrow...

I will keep writing them, though. People love this too much!
[info]magic_markers09 wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 08:06 pm (UTC)
I really like this series you've created. It's well written and makes you anticipate what the next chapter will entail.

Love it ...More soon please!!!???
[info]storm_8 wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 08:15 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.
More is coming, in a bit maybe...
[info]wkgreen wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 08:28 pm (UTC)
Hmmm... Alex is getting a clue. :) Angelica should throw in the towel if she has any sense, of course that probably isn't going to happen. ;) Keep up the good work!
[info]storm_8 wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 09:36 pm (UTC)
Alex is getting a clue, but the next bit should also be interesting. It isn't quite finished yet, but it should be soon. And I haven't decided what to do about Angelica yet...

Thanks for commenting!
[info]jessi_08 wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 11:28 pm (UTC)
YAY! Jen standing up for her love! :D

More? Really soon? Please?
[info]storm_8 wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 10:27 am (UTC)
yep, we are heading somewhere.

I don't know how soon the next one will be... i've erased it twice already, but i think third time's the charm. And I'm currently with out internet at home, so i can't say how soon the next will be up.
[info]jessi_08 wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 05:04 pm (UTC)
:D YAY.

AW! I hate not having internet. It drives me crazy.
[info]storm_8 wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 05:08 pm (UTC)
Don't I know it. I'm currently in the college library finishing the second bit of the next installment to post it. Have posted the first already... No internet leaves lots of free time to write...
[info]jessi_08 wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 05:27 pm (UTC)
Thank god for the library. Though at the moment I'm only using mine to get from one side of the campus to the other... its faster. Yeah, no internet would leave a lot of time to write... :D
[info]storm_8 wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 05:48 pm (UTC)
Hopefully i'll be all settled with internet within the next few days... Until the end of the month i will have it!
Anyway, it looks like i'll have to come back tomorrow to post the second part of "Epiphanies and Confessions". I'll go home and have a CSI marathon!! Get reacquainted with these lovely ladies
[info]jessi_08 wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 05:57 pm (UTC)
Hopefully! :D Ill be waiting for the next part as always, I read it and loved it! :D I love Spike for playing CSI all the time. Plus it starts tonight and Sara's in it! :D So excited...but someone needs to sit down the all the networks and explain to them they can't play everything on one night, CSI, Skins, Greys, Fringe.
[info]faithy_candy wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 12:47 am (UTC)
That's so cute. I hope you continue.
[info]storm_8 wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 10:27 am (UTC)
Thank you! And I'll try and keep this up.
[info]authorw wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 07:43 am (UTC)
Love that Jen went to stand up for herself and for Alex.
I love Alex's reaction when she was allowed back in the second time.
[info]storm_8 wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 10:28 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed this one. I hope the next one will make people happy...
[info]scorpio2097 wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 10:09 pm (UTC)
whoop go jen ..... i love this series .. it brightens my day n puts a smile on my face :)
[info]storm_8 wrote:
Sep. 25th, 2009 04:05 pm (UTC)
I'm always happy to make people's days brighter!
Thanks for reading (I hope you keep reading too). I'm glad everyone likes this!
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